Some where along
life's dusty road
we get dehydrated
deep within
our hearts & minds
losing our fuel
losing our focus
why we do
what we do
searching for happiness
the best way we know how
only until we drink
from the spring
of hope,dreams
hardcore persistence
we're re-fueled
ready to walk
the road of
New Beginnings
6 comments:
You wrote this? Pretty good!
thanks happy you like it.
Ah like d simplicity of it. sayin alot wit few words. Not many could do dat. Bless
I connect with it. yuh didnt lie there. Is the creator the spring? What refuels?
The spring is any thing you use to renew what was taking away,to fill the spaces, to fill the emptiness you have. Many people do this in different forms so use religion, some use memories of past love ones while some find themselves deep within why they do what they do to continue living.
What re-fuels? Hope,yes hope for a better life, hope for a better day.
bless up
I think it was a bit ironic (almost scary) in the sense that it reminded me of an experience I had today. It captures exactly how I felt in such a way that it seems like you were reading my mind or something.I thank God for that friend who acted as my fuel...
I'd always admire your realistic, deep, down-to-earth style of writing...you say it as it is, no embelishment needed. Keep doing your thing!
Lotsa luv superstar...
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